Guerdie Dorelien

English 094

Professor: Sulzycki

12/09/15

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

               Breast Cancer Disease

 

When I was younger, I used to understand things differently. I thought the most common diseases or most of the terrible diseases like cancer were genetic. I didn’t think like anyone can get sick or affected from anyone of this disease at any time, I even thought getting sick or affected from anyone of this disease wasn’t a big deal because there is doctor around with money you can get cured at any time. That was my thoughts. Now realized how I was completely wrong, because you might have money, and you died without treated. To depend on what kind of disease and how bad is your diagnostic.

              Like today, Cancer is very frequent in America not only in America, but in the whole word. And in different part though your body, I never knew about all that kind of cancer I’m hearing now. I was very surprise to hear even about eyes cancer, and lips cancer. For The type of cancer I heard about now, I’m asking if doctors or scientist can’t stop cancers from spreading around. Is true cancer’s not a contagious disease, but I’m telling you based on the amount of people who has cancer in this world and it reaction on the human body, it seems like cancer is more powerful than some contagious disease. Because most of the contagious disease will not kill you once you give yourself the minimum care required by going to your doctor appointment, take your medicine, and follow the doctor’s instructions, But to get survive from cancer even if you follow the doctor instructions you have to be very lucky to survive with the all kind of cancers especially breast Cancer I know a lot of people who died with breast cancer.

I used to see a lot of people with one breast or some of them have no breast at all I couldn’t imagine why all this people missing their breast until I found out all happened because of breast cancer.

         And what is breast cancer mean? Based on (breast cancer.com) they definite breast cancer as an uncontrolled growth cells. And some of them say breast cancer is a cancer that develops from breast tissue. When I go farther, to definite cancer itself, is a disease that occurs when cells in the body begins to divide at a faster rate than the body requires. Cancer also known as a malignant tumor or malignant neoplasm is a group of diseases involving abnormal cell grow with the potential to invade or spread to other part of the body.

 Breast cancer. According to the American society, 226,870 new cases of invasive breast cancer where expected to occur during 2012 in the U.S. And between the 10 most common cancer like:

Skin cancer

Lung cancer

Prostate cancer

Breast cancer

Colorectal cancer

Kidney renal cancer

Bladder cancer

Non- Hodgkin’s Lymphoma cancer

Thyroid cancer

Endometrial cancer

These are the most common forms of cancer for men and women. Among these you can see like breast cancer is on the fourth position, and breast cancer most frequently diagnosed among women. Breast cancer also the second leading cause of cancer death in women. My question is why breast cancer it most among the women body? What make it develop most to women?  A few weeks ago, I read a newspaper about breast cancer, they say breast cancer also causing by some antiperspirants products, if that really true why breast cancer it mostly among women? Because most of the men and women products are pretty much the same maybe the smell is different.  

       The statistics of American cancer society for 2015 reevaluate that three million women are living with breast cancer, and one –third of them don’t even know it.

According to American cancer society one- third of women have breast cancer and they don’t know about it. My questions are:  what can they do about it? How health department can save more people’ live? Because most of the time people get victim from breast cancer or any kind of cancer even lose their live, it because of unknown cancers.

 For me among all the definition scientist give to cancer I definite cancer as a

(Cunning disease) because the  cancer virus might here in your body you don’t know it, you don’t feel it until it almost finish with one of your organ about to attack more of them before you discover it you might die without discover cancer in your body if you are not a lucky one. There’s a lady from my church she had colon cancer, lymph, and liver cancer she didn’t know about them she was living with all these cancers until she got a car accident a few months ago, shad to do an (MIR) so they  were able to discover all these cancers. Can you imagine she was living with all these cancer in her body and she didn’t know about them, by that she could be die without knowing. I think the way health department goes to evaluate people’s health I don’t think is in the appropriate way especially for some testing. Like why do people have to be in a certain age to get testing for some diseases? Yet, for some diseases you don’t need to be old to attack you. Why do health department goes (OSHA) with ages or genetic to testing people for certain diseases? Why they don’t go with the consequences of unknown diseases. For example breast cancer according to women health center, women should get a mammogram at age 39 to 40s because screening mammograms can detect breast abnormalities early in women in their 40s.” (Avon39.org)  I think if health department (OSHA) are really care for people’s live, they should allow women to test earlier than their 40s. Because diseases don’t have an age to attack people especially now with this environment with the pollution. They even have more reasons to not wait for a certain age for testing women earlier against breast cancer. According to Dr Mercola “new research examining parabens found in cancerous human breast tissue points the finger at antiperspirant and other cosmetics for increasing your risk of breast cancer so does aluminum and alum.”

In this point after discovering some of the sources what measure do (OSHA) takes to avoid more people affected? How can health ministry stop selling those products on the market? If the researches are true?

          As a nursing assistant I been working with a lot of patient who is suffering with breast cancer.  Some of them just have one breast some of them don’t have none.  When I explain to them about some products that cause breast cancer like antiperspirant deodorant, most of them don’t believe that because they very old and they didn’t have those products frequently on the market like today, and they  didn’t know any member of their family die with breast cancer. They even tell me how they used to make their own deodorant by using corn starch and bicarbonate, but they still have breast cancer. I don’t say Dr Mercola research is not true, but I don’t blame those elderly also because if you go back to years before not everybody used to use these products, and those products wasn’t that popular. They also say some bra are causes, I think breast cancer it dominate scientist more than they can get a solution, because they keep coming with more source and causes than coming with some solutions.

     In conclusion because of all these confusions about breast cancer s and affect I will suggest women health center to provide mammogram test to women younger than 40s at least women should start at age 18 to 20s. I completely understand that the mammogram machine it more clearly to detect the cancer virus in 40s women because of all these death that breast cancer causing I will suggest them to be more creative so they can create more materials to check breast cancer in early age. Because when somebody get sick it’s not only affected the person who is sick but the all family especially when a young person die because of negligent. 

Guerdie Dorelien

 Reflective Cover letter

 

As I been studding and writing English for five years. There is a big different from

wen I just move to United States and now. The first year I move to the United

States in 2010, I couldn’t speak or write English at all for my first two months.

 Everytime I listened to people during a long conversation or assisted them

writing a long paper like a journal, I asked to myself; “do I would be able to that

one day”? And when that’s going to be? Here the day comes. For my five years,

where I’m able to open any conversation with anybody, I don’t feel embarrass no

more when people’s talking to me. I even able to talk about my life such as: my writing skills, my family, and my career.

I’m choosing to share my first essay which is: how I can describe myself as a writer? The

Way I always feel comfortable to write a piece of paper about my life or something when I have to, I

always feel more comfortable to share my writing  with others. Before I didn’t like to write not only in

English, but I didn’t want to do it at all. After I get my writing skills, learn how to write, know how to get

 people’s attention in my writing I feel like it always a pleasure for me to share my writing with others.

My second essay it about my relation with father: It always a pleasure for me to talk about my

Father all the times and to anyone, because he deserve it .By reading my second essay you will see

what kind of father I have. Is it true people know more about my love for him than he knows,

because the more I tell people how much I love him I always choose to write about him because

there’s a proverb says: the words gone, but the writing stay. One day he will know more how his sacriffice was counted for me.

My third and final essay, it about my career. It’s to share with you the feeling that I have about

having a career and why it is important to have a career in your life. And also to tell people to

not give up their goal for just a job. Some people think when they have a job, they making

money that’s all they need. Nope, this not true. You will see the difference and the consequence

after you lose that job. Knowledge it’s knowledge when you go to school your learn something you get

your Diploma or a bachelor degree it something different. You got more respect and you feel more comfortable in this society.

Finally I realized it’s very nice to have writing as part of your habit. By writing you keep your

mind busy in action which is can help you with your intelligence and also can prevent you from

some mental diseases. I like writing and I can guarantee myself I will be a better writer in the

 future not only to write some paper but some books

Guerdie Dorelien’s

                                       Refflective Cover letter

As I been studing and writing english for five years. There is a big different from

when I just move to United States and now.The first year I move to the United

States in 2010, I couldn’t speak or write english at all for my first two months.

 Everytime I listened to people during a long conversation or assisted them

writing a long paper like a journal,I asked to myself; “do I would be able to that

one day”? And when that’s going to be? Here the day comes. For my five years,

where I’m able to open any convevsation with anybody,I don’t feel embarrass no

more when people’s talking to me. I even able to talk about my life such as: my writing skills, my family, and my career.

I’m choosing to share my first easay which is: how I can describe myself as a  

writer? The way I always feel confortable to write a piece when I have to,I

always feel confortable to talk about my wrtiting  espacially in english.

Before I didn’t like to write not only in english, but I didn’t want to do it at

all. After I get my writing skills, learn how to write, know how to get

people’s attention in my writing I feel like it alwas a pleasur for me to share my writing with others.

My second easay it about my relation with father

It always a pleasur for me to talk about my father all the times and to anyon,because he deserve it .By reading my second easay you will see what kind of father I have. Is it true people know more about my love for him than he knows, because the more I tell people how much I love him I always choose to write about him because there’s a proverb says: the words gone, but the writing stay. One day he will know more how his sacriffice was counted for me.

My third and final easay, it about my career. It to share people to not give up without  attendre their goal. Some people think when they have a job that’s  all they need. I’m trying

Guerdie Dorelien                                                                                                                                           Dorelien

Professor Marc

English 094

09,09,2015

                                        How I Can Describe Myself as a Writer

The same I can’t tell when I will stop writing, it’s the same way I can’t tell when I did start to write. To

 become a writer it’s not something impossible but it is not also easy. Because you have to know what

you are going to write about, think about how you are going to write it to make people or whoever’s

going to it understand you. Before writing a paper or a paragraph was a big deal for me because I had

 nothing to write about. When I’m getting older started to realized I have much to write about and more to share. Especially my life what I been though I can even write a book.

Now I even happier because I’m able to write more and more even in different languages. Like

creole, French, and English. Before it was very hard for me to write in English, I thought it was

because I was learning it I might need more vocabularies by that time. Even though I write it a

lot, I said before it was hard for me to write in English not because now I’m perfect but there is a big

 difference, I’m getting better. Now I’m able to write up to three pages not perfectly fine, but whoever’s the reader will be able to get the idea or to understand what I’m writing about.

I remember when I first entered to Housatonic my advisor asked me to write a paragraph about

Alcohol I will never forget that I couldn’t write it. Because I couldn’t write in English, and also I

didn’t like to write either. I started to like to write after my last two ESL classes where I had a

good teacher who was very patient and helpful. Since that I like to writing, sometimes, when I’m thinking I feel like I write more than I speak.

I considered writing is a part of my routine even I’m not a writer because I don’t write any book

yet but, for much I have to write about and the way I  write a lot almost all the times, I think I have much to write a book.

Guerdie Dorelien                                                                                                                                           Dorelien

Professor Marc

English 094

09,09,2015

 

                                        How I Can Describe Myself as a Writer

The same I can’t tell when I will stop writing, it’s the same way I can’t tell when I did start to write. To

 become a writer it’s not something impossible but it is not also easy. Because you have to know what

you are going to write about, think about how you are going to write it to make people or whoever’s

going to it understand you. Before writing a paper or a paragraph was a big deal for me because I had

 nothing to write about. When I’m getting older started to realized I have much to write about and more to share. Especially my life what I been though I can even write a book.

Now I even happier because I’m able to write more and more even in different languages. Like

creole, French, and English. Before it was very hard for me to write in English, I thought it was

because I was learning it I might need more vocabularies by that time. Even though I write it a

lot, I said before it was hard for me to write in English not because now I’m perfect but there is a big

 difference, I’m getting better. Now I’m able to write up to three pages not perfectly fine, but whoever’s the reader will be able to get the idea or to understand what I’m writing about.

I remember when I first entered to Housatonic my advisor asked me to write a paragraph about

Alcohol I will never forget that I couldn’t write it. Because I couldn’t write in English, and also I

didn’t like to write either. I started to like to write after my last two ESL classes where I had a

good teacher who was very patient and helpful. Since that I like to writing, sometimes, when I’m thinking I feel like I write more than I speak.

I considered writing is a part of my routine even I’m not a writer because I don’t write any book

yet but, for much I have to write about and the way I  write a lot almost all the times, I think I have much to write a book.

 

 

 

Guerdie Dorelien

Prof: Mark Sulzycki

10/27/15

                                                                            Why Toyota Cars Are Better.

Everybody has a preference in something. It can be anything like: car, place, or house etc... They go/ choose by quality, size or color for some people it doesn't matter they just go with their desire. For example Cars there is so many cars around different makes and models. It hard to find everybody with the same car, it can be same make but different model.

I remember when I was looking to buy my first car, I didn't know what to buy because I was

afraid to not buy anything. By asking friends and family members,

everyone told me to buy either Toyota, Nissan or Honda. But the best one it's Toyota. When I

asked why? “Because Toyota's the best brand. They very good in gas, and also Toyota’ parts are

more durable than the other cars. “They replied to me”. They also said these type of cars like: Volvo,

Ford, KIA their parts are cheaper than Toyota's parts, and they give more mechanical problems than Toyota.

By listened to them I bought an old Toyota Corolla, it was old in years, but not in running. It

was a very good car it ran perfect and saved me money in gas as well. I changed my Toyota Corolla into a

Nissan maxima after an accident since it wasn't be able to drive after the accident.

The Nissan maxima was good too, but I could remark a little different by running even the Nissan maxima was five years old younger than the Toyota, but I could feel the Toyota was running better.

Now I'm driving a Nissan pathfinder, it a very good car, in good condition compared to the ages

between the Toyota and the pathfinder, even thou the pathfinder it more recent and stronger I still realize I like Toyota’s better.

I finally realize why they say Toyota is number one between all the Japanese cars brand like

Nissan, Honda etc... And also How the Japanese cars are more recent than the American cars.

After all these experiences with different cars. Whenever I'll buy a new car, it will be one of the Toyota 'brand again.

Guerdie Dorelien                                                                                                                                                                Dorelien

Marc

English 094

September 23, 2015

Haitian Food Culture

As Haitian there’s a lot of thing I like with the Haitian culture. But what I like the most is the New Year.

 Where we have to celebrate two big things New Year and our independence’s day. The reason why I

like these occasion better it because of pumpkin soup. Everybody knows pumpkin we see a lot especially

 for Halloween where they used it to make different thing. I like eating my boil pumpkin and the soup.

Sometimes I don’t wait for New Year to make pumpkin, I have it almost every Sunday.

Every country has their own culture. It can be anything like: Food, music, clothes dance and life

style. It happen some people forget about their culture when they move to another country, but some people are not.

Like for Haitian people, we can’t forget our pumpkin soup; wherever the country we move to.

Even they don’t have this custom we still have to do it this is a way to recognize Haitian people

from your job or anywhere wait for the New Year you all Haitian with their pumpkin soup for lunch.

 Haitian was the first black liberated from slave in January 1804. As you know when you slave

you really private from almost everything; therefore you are not allow to do or eat everything

you want. They all were depend on the slaves’ owner. Having the good food when you slave I

think it almost impossible. Because been in slavery you don’t treat like human being you get treated like animal.

What happen is when Haitian were in slavery the used to make good pumpkin soup for their

owner, but they didn’t allow to eat some.

In January 1^st 1804 they fought for their independence; as they become independent

every food they were private from they decided to eat them. In particularly pumpkin

Soup, was the first and unit thing they have for that day.

For this reason, since 1804 till now Haitian people never celebrate New Year without a bowl of pumpkin soup.